ext_92461 ([identity profile] dickgloucester.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] averygoodun42 2010-01-06 03:46 pm (UTC)

Well, I like it. I don't know your model, but the style is quite funny. I think you could make the content funnier, to match it.

I love your use of the word "miffed" and the end - good comic effect. I am assuming you're going for comic effect by using this style?
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