Where reading a Seuss book is bad for the outlook

[averygoodun42]

I just wrote this line in "She Married Her Choice."
(I think I will edit at least once, maybe twice)


Closing her mouth up quite small and quite tight, she huffed with her nose and glared up a fright.


Perhaps I should read something else before writing?
Like fanfic or Dickens or Austen or Rowling?

Comments

[camillo1978.livejournal.com]

Sent over here by Keladry Lupin and snorted with laughter 0.3 seconds later. Thanks for that! Would you object if I friended you?

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Not at all! Or, not if you don't mind being friended back, anyway. ;-)

[camillo1978.livejournal.com]

It would be a pleasure.

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Well, hopefully you'll still feel that way after you've experienced some of my whinging. :D

[evieeros.livejournal.com]

Ditto from me!

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Welcome!