Where reading a Seuss book is bad for the outlook

[averygoodun42]

I just wrote this line in "She Married Her Choice."
(I think I will edit at least once, maybe twice)


Closing her mouth up quite small and quite tight, she huffed with her nose and glared up a fright.


Perhaps I should read something else before writing?
Like fanfic or Dickens or Austen or Rowling?

Comments

[renitaleandra.livejournal.com]

BWAHAHAHA!

[keladry_lupin]

Oh, you're so cute!

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

*snicker*

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

:D

[tudorpot.livejournal.com]

I think Dr. Seuss has some competition. Look out for DR .S -fanfic. Drum-tummied Snumm/East Beast and Flummox threesome perhaps?

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Ergh. No, I confess,
this rhyming is done only under duress
I much prefer prose and clear sentence structures
to something as wild as three prone, sated creatures.

[tudorpot.livejournal.com]

Ah but prose with clear sentence structures could portray three creatures finding bliss so well. Alas I'm not gifted with your talent at rhyming..

[southernwitch69.livejournal.com]

LOL! Are they eating green eggs and ham?

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

No, wine and cheese!
They much prefer that over eggs, if you please!

[southernwitch69.livejournal.com]

I'm eating ham, I am.
I'm eating ham with dear Sam.
Sam and I are eating this ham
and taking pictures with the cam.

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Ah, but I will not share that ham, no ma'am!

[darth-kittius.livejournal.com]

That's fantastic! Thanks for sharing!!

[pern-dragon.livejournal.com]

THAT...

was awesome.

LOL!!!!!!!!

[cecelle.livejournal.com]

LOL!

[mundungus42.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh!! *dies laughing*

Welcome to my head. :D

[fishity.livejournal.com]

Okay, this? Is just about the cutest thing ever :)

[camillo1978.livejournal.com]

Sent over here by Keladry Lupin and snorted with laughter 0.3 seconds later. Thanks for that! Would you object if I friended you?

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Not at all! Or, not if you don't mind being friended back, anyway. ;-)

[camillo1978.livejournal.com]

It would be a pleasure.

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Well, hopefully you'll still feel that way after you've experienced some of my whinging. :D

[evieeros.livejournal.com]

Ditto from me!

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Welcome!