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averygoodun42 ([personal profile] averygoodun42) wrote2007-08-26 09:12 pm
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Where reading a Seuss book is bad for the outlook

I just wrote this line in "She Married Her Choice."
(I think I will edit at least once, maybe twice)


Closing her mouth up quite small and quite tight, she huffed with her nose and glared up a fright.


Perhaps I should read something else before writing?
Like fanfic or Dickens or Austen or Rowling?
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[identity profile] renitaleandra.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
BWAHAHAHA!

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[personal profile] keladry_lupin 2007-08-27 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you're so cute!

[identity profile] firefly124.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
*snicker*

[identity profile] tudorpot.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
I think Dr. Seuss has some competition. Look out for DR .S -fanfic. Drum-tummied Snumm/East Beast and Flummox threesome perhaps?

[identity profile] averygoodun.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Ergh. No, I confess,
this rhyming is done only under duress
I much prefer prose and clear sentence structures
to something as wild as three prone, sated creatures.

[identity profile] tudorpot.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Ah but prose with clear sentence structures could portray three creatures finding bliss so well. Alas I'm not gifted with your talent at rhyming..

[identity profile] southernwitch69.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! Are they eating green eggs and ham?

[identity profile] averygoodun.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
No, wine and cheese!
They much prefer that over eggs, if you please!

[identity profile] southernwitch69.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
I'm eating ham, I am.
I'm eating ham with dear Sam.
Sam and I are eating this ham
and taking pictures with the cam.

[identity profile] averygoodun.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, but I will not share that ham, no ma'am!

[identity profile] darth-kittius.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
That's fantastic! Thanks for sharing!!

[identity profile] pern-dragon.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
THAT...

was awesome.

LOL!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] cecelle.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 06:15 am (UTC)(link)
LOL!

[identity profile] mundungus42.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhhh!! *dies laughing*

Welcome to my head. :D


[identity profile] fishity.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, this? Is just about the cutest thing ever :)
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[identity profile] camillo1978.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Sent over here by Keladry Lupin and snorted with laughter 0.3 seconds later. Thanks for that! Would you object if I friended you?

[identity profile] averygoodun.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Not at all! Or, not if you don't mind being friended back, anyway. ;-)
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[identity profile] camillo1978.livejournal.com 2007-08-28 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
It would be a pleasure.

[identity profile] averygoodun.livejournal.com 2007-08-28 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, hopefully you'll still feel that way after you've experienced some of my whinging. :D

[identity profile] averygoodun.livejournal.com 2007-08-28 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome!
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