Where reading a Seuss book is bad for the outlook

[averygoodun42]

I just wrote this line in "She Married Her Choice."
(I think I will edit at least once, maybe twice)


Closing her mouth up quite small and quite tight, she huffed with her nose and glared up a fright.


Perhaps I should read something else before writing?
Like fanfic or Dickens or Austen or Rowling?

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