Sorry for the lame review at Ashwinder. I really love the chapter but I'm uncomfortable saying more in the archive. The reason is very simple and has to do with me as much as your writing. I keep praising you for the way you write your characters emotions and how it makes it so easy to feel it with them... either you outdone yourself or I'm even more sensible than usual... probably both things, really... Hermione's been overwhelmed and in a rollercoaster of emotions throughout the chapter... and I'm there overwhelmed as well. *sniffs* *hugs* Unfortunately for me she got to snog Severus in the end and I didn't *pouts* I hope she gets lots of cuddles and sweet moments with Severus so both, Hermione and I, can regain a bit of sense of calm, peace and feel some quiet love. *hugs again*
![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2007-08-20 07:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-08-21 07:38 am (UTC)The reason is very simple and has to do with me as much as your writing. I keep praising you for the way you write your characters emotions and how it makes it so easy to feel it with them... either you outdone yourself or I'm even more sensible than usual... probably both things, really... Hermione's been overwhelmed and in a rollercoaster of emotions throughout the chapter... and I'm there overwhelmed as well. *sniffs*
*hugs*
Unfortunately for me she got to snog Severus in the end and I didn't *pouts*
I hope she gets lots of cuddles and sweet moments with Severus so both, Hermione and I, can regain a bit of sense of calm, peace and feel some quiet love.
*hugs again*