Where reading a Seuss book is bad for the outlook

[averygoodun42]

I just wrote this line in "She Married Her Choice."
(I think I will edit at least once, maybe twice)


Closing her mouth up quite small and quite tight, she huffed with her nose and glared up a fright.


Perhaps I should read something else before writing?
Like fanfic or Dickens or Austen or Rowling?

Comments

[renitaleandra.livejournal.com]

BWAHAHAHA!

[keladry_lupin]

Oh, you're so cute!

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

*snicker*

[tudorpot.livejournal.com]

I think Dr. Seuss has some competition. Look out for DR .S -fanfic. Drum-tummied Snumm/East Beast and Flummox threesome perhaps?

[southernwitch69.livejournal.com]

LOL! Are they eating green eggs and ham?

[darth-kittius.livejournal.com]

That's fantastic! Thanks for sharing!!

[pern-dragon.livejournal.com]

THAT...

was awesome.

LOL!!!!!!!!

[cecelle.livejournal.com]

LOL!

[mundungus42.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh!! *dies laughing*

Welcome to my head. :D

[fishity.livejournal.com]

Okay, this? Is just about the cutest thing ever :)

[camillo1978.livejournal.com]

Sent over here by Keladry Lupin and snorted with laughter 0.3 seconds later. Thanks for that! Would you object if I friended you?