septentrion1970's drabble

[averygoodun42]

Prompt: Snape and Sawyer meeting unexpectedly on the island.


When Severus woke to find the shack's dusty ceiling replaced by greenery, he knew he'd died. Sighing, he wondered if this could be heaven.

It was peaceful watching the trees sway in the breeze, but just as it was starting to lull him to sleep, a haggard man burst out of the grass. Severus raised his head to get a better look.

The man stopped and tilted his head menacingly, then aimed a gun at Severus.

"Who the hell are you," the man growled.

Severus dropped his head back to the ground in resignation.

"Right. I'm not in heaven, then."

Comments

[septentrion1970.livejournal.com]

That would be how I picture it. the word play with "hell" is very well found. I wonder how long before they fight in earnest.

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

I'm not sure they would fight in earnest. Though, with such similar personalities, I imagine some kind of fight would be inevitable, wouldn't it? *sigh* I think that they would fight in earnest when Severus was found and recruited by Ben. :-/

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

This is great! What a brilliant idea!

Nope, not heaven, Severus.

[averygoodun.livejournal.com]

Not heaven at all!

It was Sept's idea, and isn't it brilliant? This was the hardest prompt to keep to 100 words!

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

I'm fairly sure you'd get no complaints if you were inspired to go further with it. *innocent look*